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I am completely disappointed in this manga. While the artwork was descent, the stories were boring, the characters had very little to no personalities, and the chapters are obviously too damn short! Everything about this manga is very bland and quick-paced- heck, I don't even think it should be considered a manga! Why weren't the chapters longer, and why weren't the stories longer? And Miyuki is probably the worst thing about this manga. While she had the largest role, she was both bland and annoying - I got tired of her whining almost right away. She (much like everything else) definitely could have been written better. I actually wanted to see much more of these characters; especially the way they "interacted" with Miyuki. I mean, come on, let's actually have some fun with this idea. If it's meant to be erotic and lewd...well than use that in a much more creative way.

Why not give each character an entire chapter or two to help with their development? Why not have Miyuki actually enjoy the sexual escapades that the women in this bizarre world end up putting her in? Why not make Miyuki a much more confident and outgoing person the more unnatural and abnormal things she faces? Also, why not just do the whole manga in color? 'Cause seriously, it would look so much more beautiful in color - though The White Rabbit should be, well white; and The Queen should have hearts on her outfit. Not to mention that at the end of each chapter it says "Never End" - yet there was something new happening every chapter, and there were times where nothing made sense. The plot was all over the place, and nothing was given enough time for you to really give a damn of what was going on.

What's sadder is that you can actually see what this project could have been. It might have been something good. So what if it was filled with a bunch of yuri complications? Something can be erotic, and still be good at the same time. All these beautiful women, and they don't get enough attention or time in the story.